Thread:Paul.rea/@comment-24060784-20140304054100/@comment-4091815-20140306144416

The Peter Hale thing you did this morning needed more information to clarify what he actually DID mean - otherwise it's just confusing the issue that taking too much pain is dangerous. Besides - later in the piece we learn that Derek could lose his Alpha status.

We've talked about the Red Eyes thing in Raving - didn't happen.

Adding the word "talk" to Battlefield was unnecessary since the context is provided in the sentence before.

The Stiles and his dad stuff was confusing and unnecessary - it is an emotional counterpoint not a factual point moving the story forward.

Those are all the changes I've made to your edits - besides pictures that don't fit our standards. Please don't expect me to walk you through edits that don't make the cut in future.