Thread:Calicokat/@comment-4091815-20141029150327/@comment-4091815-20141101182153

Your intro is fine

The body with all your evidence is good.

We need a summation discussing what the water elements might mean - or what various meta proponents think they mean.

You can quote people and link to their sources in that final paragraph if you like.

Overall it's a nice set up for the overall discussion.