Thread:Calicokat/@comment-4091815-20141029150327/@comment-4091815-20141107142502

Howdy!

I'll work some more on editing the new piece later today.

Of the two topics covered, the rearrangement of sets is the strongest. Consider opening with this and then moving into the disappearing people and "many worlds" theory stuff.

Also, the intro should flow (pun intended) from your water story. Consider a brief recap as part of your intro.

I also wonder if there are other theories about what's going on with the disappearing and the set dressing that we could include - still focusing on "many worlds" as your favorite.

I'm enjoying this very much.