Thread:Godechaud/@comment-4802762-20150327023556/@comment-5237598-20150404155322

It was good so it didn't take me too long to read it ;)

I might go a little different with the story telling. I think I would reveal her schizophrenia at an early stage, so the reader has a constant struggle... is she really sick or does the devils son really exist...

But please don't take this the wrong way, i really do love your story