Thread:Calicokat/@comment-4091815-20141029150327

I see you've begun working out some pieces. I don't think you have to explain everything at once. I see this as a series of articles.

For example - the thing about the voice as Posey jumps in the pool could be a whole article and we can tie it in with the rest as you move forward from there.

The mirrors could be their own thing as could the set redressing and the disappearing people.

I get that META is the "everything of everything" but I think parsing it out in small but detailed chunks will be easier to sell to an audience unfamiliar with the concept.

Paul 