Thread:Godechaud/@comment-4802762-20150327023556/@comment-5237598-20150331071240

That actually sounds great. The thing is whith that kind of stories, you need to have a good plotline... until the end of the story. If you want to have a happy ending, I think you should have it figured out from the beginning. I hate stories where at the end, through some weird incidents that the author "forgot" to mention before, the protagonist miraculously saves the day... It seems to me that more often than not in that kind of stories, the focus is on the original premiss and the end seems more improvized than anything else.

I love your idea, it's fresh and something I haven't come across yet! So congrats. I'd love to read it someday :)

Why is that guy in line for the devil? Is he doing it willingly? Is he possessed? (Did you get inspired by charmed somehow, Cole as the source with Phoebe...?)