Thread:Godechaud/@comment-4802762-20150327023556/@comment-4802762-20150401143638

Well I actually do want to run it by you because I'm not quite sure if readers will actually like it or not. It'd be nice to get some feedback from a friend. *Keep in mind that the story is a psychological thriller*

So, throughout the story, it's mentioned that the main character's brother committed suicide because he was overwhelmed with schizophrenia. Well, it turns out that the main character also has schizophrenia (I allude to this a lot throughout the story so you don't have to worry about me just throwing it out there out of nowhere) and everything after her brother's funeral has been a figment of her imagination.

Oh, and I forgot to mention, I still have a copy of the original short story. I can send it to you if you want to read it (you don't have to though, if you don't want to).