Talk:Jackson Whittemore/@comment-86.139.36.217-20120726230619/@comment-86.139.36.217-20120727134132

I thought of a scene where the Baykok comes out durring school.

Jackson is in class when he gets a migraine. He looks up to get the teacher's atention but stops in shock. In his point of view some of the other studedts are dead at their desks their stomachs ripped open and covered in blood. The teacher notices that Jackson has gone pale and is sweating and sends him to the nurses office.

Out in the hallway he is no better and gets a sensory overload of diffrent sents; Scott, Alison, Issac, Erica, Boyd Gerad and sevral others. Basically the Baykok can smell all these warriors close by and is getting more worked up and exited. Jackson manages to get outside to try and get some air but we can se his skin is starting to turn pale and lethary and his teeth have become sharper.

Elsewhere Scott and Alison are chasing the Kanima (I still havent decided who its gonna be in this version) that appeared in the lockers and tried to attack Scott. The two figure the master wants them out of the way and hope it dosent try and run into a class. It bounds into the library followed by the other two. The library is abandoned at this time of day though they find the librarian face down slashed by the kanima. Alison says she will get the librarian to safety while Scott goese looking for the Kanima wich is stalking him from the shelves. He finds a broken window and thinks the creature whent outside but the glass is inside meaning something came through the window. A familiar cry fills the air and Scott is yanked out the window and thrown across the yard by the Baykok. He manages to get his bearings just at the creature charges him and narrowly avoids a haymaker from it. Scot knows he cant stay here because Alison is now alone in the library with the Kanima.

Scott being Scott tries to reason with the Baykok thinking the creature was like he was when he first changed and dosent know or understand what its doing. Has far has he knows it hasnt managed to kill anyone yet and perhaps he can help it get control. The creature just hisses at him and advances like it wants a fight and a crash is heard in the backround followed by a scream from Alisson. Useing a Lacrosse move Scott get past the creature wich is distracted by the scream. Scott manages to get through the window and finds the Kanima holding a paralysed Alison upside down and writing a message on the chalkboard. "Your last warning stay away or I kill you all" it then tosesses Alison into Scott befre running off. Scott gose looking for the two monsters outside after checking Alison but finds they have both vanished.

Opinions welcome