Thread:Godechaud/@comment-4802762-20150327023556/@comment-4802762-20150401180836

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That's exactly how I ended the short story! After it's revealed that she's schizophrenic, she's taken to a padded cell. Her parents go up to the psychiatrist and asks him if they can see her so he lets them monitor her through a two way mirror. All they can see if her rocking back and forth and muttering under her breath, "Don't let him get me, don't let him get me." Then, the lights go out and she can feel hands grabbing at her, trying to hold her down.

I asked my friends what they thought and they said that, while they would be upset at first, they would still enjoy it.