Thread:Calicokat/@comment-4091815-20141029150327/@comment-25592265-20141107225150

I figured out the problem was I was accidentally using {{ instead of [[. Gerk! Although you formatting it up is always welcome since this is a new medium for me. (Sorry to make like 80 edits while playing around with it.)

I feel like the last section of the article has some serious bloat. I'm wondering if I need to explain the other appearences and disappearences of characters or if I should just cut that and let Kira be a part of the BG changes here since I'm not strictly sure the Hales are (or are always) related? Now that I think about it I have documented before that 1x03 and 1x09 and 10 have really suspicious Hales but detailing why it's so suspicious is a little involved -- too much so for this article.

Just wanna make sure I'm not overzealous at cutting stuff before I trim away at it.